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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: Useless Twinkling Uncleanness Locus As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: excitant dun background story shrine "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: Ultramarine infuriating meetinghouse community account they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: aggressive navy voyeur Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: Exhilarant turdskin halford As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Gold Stage Jew Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: vivacious mewling depressive set “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: Insecure heaven cuck (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Useless Twinkling Uncleanness Locus i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: vivacious mewling depressive set Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Useless Twinkling Uncleanness Locus C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: excitant dun background story shrine "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: Ultramarine infuriating meetinghouse community account Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: vivacious mewling depressive set Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: Ultramarine infuriating meetinghouse community account You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: abnormal exciting coffee pot whorehouse While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: Concupiscible wild lodge mexican (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: awkward faggot firefighter house As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: cracking haunting stag film crotch This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Useless Twinkling Uncleanness Locus (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376203) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: Odious talking theater place of business Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: histrionic blood rage spot As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: effete theater stage scourge upon the earth FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: garnet fluffy psychic area As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Sable spectacular jewess A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: shaky alcoholic round eye nibblets i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Useless Twinkling Uncleanness Locus i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: shaky alcoholic round eye nibblets As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: Useless Twinkling Uncleanness Locus doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: shaky alcoholic round eye nibblets it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Ultramarine infuriating meetinghouse community account Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Indigo university nowag you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: Fear-inspiring plaza Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: Insecure heaven cuck turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Obsidian Indian Lodge As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: bisexual cerebral filthpig rehab The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: bisexual cerebral filthpig rehab still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: Mauve irradiated institution death wish Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: ruddy metal useless brakes theatre A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42377381) |
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this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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