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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: know-it-all mildly autistic locale As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: Milky pit "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: spruce zippy dilemma trump supporter they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: shimmering nudist church useless brakes Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: hyperactive theatre As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Bisexual maroon codepig stage Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: comical wine travel guidebook “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: Infuriating french hominid dingle berry (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: know-it-all mildly autistic locale i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: comical wine travel guidebook Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: know-it-all mildly autistic locale C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: Milky pit "at this time"
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: spruce zippy dilemma trump supporter Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: comical wine travel guidebook Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: spruce zippy dilemma trump supporter You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: navy vibrant coffee pot While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: Rambunctious frum tank (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: flesh glittery doctorate As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: balding grizzly native This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: know-it-all mildly autistic locale (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376203) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: deep sticky garrison azn Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: awkward wrinkle As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Thriller jade candlestick maker school FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Passionate tantric newt As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: carmine space mood A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: exhilarant address queen of the night i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: know-it-all mildly autistic locale i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: exhilarant address queen of the night As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: know-it-all mildly autistic locale doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: exhilarant address queen of the night it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: spruce zippy dilemma trump supporter Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Big abusive site mediation you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: red frisky public bath Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: Infuriating french hominid dingle berry turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: multi-colored antidepressant drug The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: carmine space mood star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: multi-colored antidepressant drug still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: Appetizing Rough-skinned Menage So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: Galvanic hospital private investor Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: fluffy chapel A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: Turquoise electric roast beef andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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