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I found whok's 2005 novel excerpt, jfc
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Date: June 6th, 2019 2:55 AM Author: shimmering concupiscible senate I never thought I'd do it, but I finally found it.
http://www.ilovephilosophy.com/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=166449 |
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Date: June 7th, 2019 9:26 PM Author: Filthy karate Ty. What an awful hunk of literary shit. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38357077) |
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Date: June 7th, 2019 10:03 PM Author: shimmering concupiscible senate (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38357174) |
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Date: June 7th, 2019 10:10 PM Author: aqua center Hey fuck you nigger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38357197) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 12:57 AM Author: Passionate chocolate menage So that's the IRL excerpt, whok? It's worse than I thought 😱 (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38357754) |
Date: June 6th, 2019 2:59 AM Author: shimmering concupiscible senate More interesting whok-related threading:
http://www.xoxohth.com/thread.php?thread_id=707335&forum_id=2#8815649
http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=1444726&forum_id=2
http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=1582700&forum_id=2#17456061
http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=1435809&forum_id=2#16157379 |
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Date: June 6th, 2019 10:58 AM Author: shimmering concupiscible senate (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38348500) |
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Date: June 6th, 2019 10:33 PM Author: shimmering concupiscible senate (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38351861) |
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Date: June 6th, 2019 11:06 PM Author: Wonderful greedy kitty cat To be at a fair,
There is more to eat than ice cream and cake. Some people go on dates and have corn dogs and fried dough. Sometimes there is a pie eating contest with delicious apple pies where contestant don't use their hands.
TBF running honiara schtick 1.0
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Date: June 7th, 2019 9:07 PM Author: Passionate chocolate menage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38357037) |
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Date: June 7th, 2019 10:27 PM Author: Razzmatazz main people heaven fake news, it’s literally one sentence (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38357251) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 12:58 AM Author: Passionate chocolate menage Not fake news, whok confirmed above.
Remember that whok was a 22-year-old dude who knew nothing about writing back then (not that he knows anything about writing now) but that's literally his "excerpt." |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 1:00 AM Author: aqua center Whats so bad about it, cunt? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38357757) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 1:03 AM Author: Passionate chocolate menage Hard to tell, dude. It doesn't draw you into a story, describes a bunch of stuff that doesn't make a lot of sense, poorly written. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38357770) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 1:06 AM Author: aqua center Poorly written, how?
I hope you know the guy/loser who stole the excerpt was a jealous and failed writer himself who posted it on his own message board and used sock puppets to criticise it. |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 1:21 AM Author: Passionate chocolate menage Confirm 2 things:
1. You're the IRL whok
2. That's the IRL excerpt written by you/him |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 1:27 AM Author: aqua center Subject: ... Nigger (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38357819) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 1:50 AM Author: Passionate chocolate menage WTF (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38357837) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 2:18 AM Author: Passionate chocolate menage Ok, if you want more details, here they are:
Excerpt (definition): A passage or quotation taken or selected from a book, document, film, or the like; extract.
Excerpts are supposed to be longer than that measly piece of trash. I would expect a FULL page to get an idea of what the larger work that is being showcased will cover.
What you wrote is literally a run-on sentence chunked together into a full paragraph. It almost looks as if you're asking "Hey, can someone tell me if I can write in the English language properly? I just took English 101."
Srsly, I hadn't read the excerpt when I first read what damn daddy wrote about it, but he's spot on:
"He spent a lot of time bragging about some stupid as fuck novel he was writing. the samples he showed to the bort indicated that whok may have suffered from blunt-force trauma to the skull at some point when his brain was still developing." (Ref: http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=2840029&forum_id=2#27570333)
Sorry, whok. This doesn't mean you can't improve, though. Why not take a creative writing course and an English 101? |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 3:28 AM Author: Pale Set Coldplay Fan Dood just tell me whats wrong with it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38357906) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 4:00 AM Author: Passionate chocolate menage I went into DETAIL about it. You don't understand what I wrote? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38357937) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 4:00 AM Author: Pale Set Coldplay Fan So you have no idea and are just a vile cunt. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38357939) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 4:17 AM Author: Passionate chocolate menage What questions do you have? Be specific. I already said its a run on sentence into a chunk or paragraph and short enough that cant qualify as an excerpt. It looks like what an 11-year-old would ask his teacher at his first try at writing something.
Ask away if you have actual questions. No clue wtf you want to hear. |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 10:04 PM Author: aqua center Novels aren't explicitly subject to perfect grammar and form. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38360752) |
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Date: June 9th, 2019 2:55 AM Author: Passionate chocolate menage WTF are you saying here.
Even if that were the case, we'd have to then be blown away by the content. You only provided a tiny excerpt where content and grammar are shit.
Provide a full page and then we can talk. |
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Date: September 20th, 2026 9:21 AM Author: Fucking Fuckface "Poorly written how?" I don't see why it matters whether it was pen to paper, fingers to keyboard, or rudimentary speech to text. It's fucking terrible no matter how it was barfed into the world (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#50144972) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 11:56 AM Author: Passionate chocolate menage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38358699) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 12:35 PM Author: Passionate chocolate menage whok? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38358819) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 1:54 PM Author: iridescent talking theater stage fuck you, nigger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38359036) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 7:17 PM Author: Passionate chocolate menage ? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38360123) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 10:21 PM Author: aqua center TITMFCR (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38360788) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 10:43 PM Author: Passionate chocolate menage ? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38360866) |
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Date: March 20th, 2020 1:04 AM Author: Pale Set Coldplay Fan 180 (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#39813962) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 2:10 PM Author: Sooty fragrant state patrolman wtf that was awful (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38359084) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 3:21 PM Author: Passionate chocolate menage Titcr (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38359329) |
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Date: June 14th, 2019 12:18 AM Author: Passionate chocolate menage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#38387165) |
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Date: March 20th, 2020 12:35 AM Author: shimmering concupiscible senate (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#39813773) |
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Date: March 20th, 2020 11:34 PM Author: Passionate chocolate menage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#39822271) |
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Date: June 13th, 2020 11:09 PM Author: Burgundy Keepsake Machete Dilemma (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#40412654) |
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Date: July 15th, 2020 1:31 AM Author: shimmering concupiscible senate (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#40610764) |
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Date: July 17th, 2020 1:34 PM Author: shimmering concupiscible senate http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=897971&forum_id=2#10505289 (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#40622701) |
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Date: September 29th, 2020 5:26 PM Author: Provocative Peach Death Wish (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#41010322) |
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Date: September 29th, 2020 6:24 PM Author: shimmering concupiscible senate (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#41010648) |
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Date: September 20th, 2026 9:10 AM Author: Beta macaca (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#50144968) |
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Date: September 20th, 2026 1:19 PM Author: Beta macaca (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#50145348) |
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Date: September 20th, 2026 10:18 PM Author: Hans Reiter/Benno von Archimboldi ? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#50146511) |
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Date: September 21st, 2026 8:07 AM Author: Beta macaca What's your question, smarty? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#50146854) |
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Date: September 21st, 2026 4:20 PM Author: my dog can log into xo more often than I can (thanks, Rach!) it was the same feeling as when he, already twice joined in the solemn covenant of marriage and now teetering upon the brink of a second and equally inevitable unjoining, of only middling intelligence and still lesser gifts in the sacred craft of the poast, during some idle hour among the other schoolchildren of the timeline, when he had boldly proclaimed his superiority, and when warned by a poaster of even modest standing (who being a full year less embarrassing imparted a world of wisdom) that he had consumed too much of his own prose and self-regard, lost to one of his lesser-known competitors, a wobbly-legged, bespectacled sporophyte of a human being, and became the laughingstock of friends and enemies alike, due solely to an ignorance of his own character. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2).#50147788) |