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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: unholy buck-toothed rehab persian As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: Motley stage milk "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: dull market faggot firefighter they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: walnut pontificating indian lodge trust fund Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: twisted incel As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Narrow-minded 180 school Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: aggressive mewling travel guidebook stage “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: House-broken Abnormal Location Regret (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: unholy buck-toothed rehab persian i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: aggressive mewling travel guidebook stage Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: unholy buck-toothed rehab persian C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: Motley stage milk "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: dull market faggot firefighter Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: aggressive mewling travel guidebook stage Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: dull market faggot firefighter You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Infuriating Stirring Private Investor While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: carmine range (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: deranged community account As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: bateful lavender depressive laser beams This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: unholy buck-toothed rehab persian (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: Glassy adventurous international law enforcement agency (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376392) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: laughsome internal respiration genital piercing Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: irradiated shivering double fault As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: very tactful step-uncle's house new version (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Claret selfie (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376340) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: geriatric buff home twinkling uncleanness FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Peach ladyboy (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376187) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Peach ladyboy As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: House-broken Abnormal Location Regret i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Red tank (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42378174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: House-broken Abnormal Location Regret i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376189) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: primrose autistic gas station (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376669) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Chartreuse cracking half-breed spot A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: exciting theater (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376341) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: Motley stage milk sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Emerald set i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: unholy buck-toothed rehab persian i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Emerald set As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: unholy buck-toothed rehab persian doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: Emerald set it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: dull market faggot firefighter Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: mischievous garrison electric furnace you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: Bat shit crazy mint den Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: House-broken Abnormal Location Regret turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:20 AM Author: exciting theater (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376607) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Olive Resort Toilet Seat As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: transparent zippy tanning salon jewess The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: Chartreuse cracking half-breed spot star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: transparent zippy tanning salon jewess still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:34 AM Author: aggressive mewling travel guidebook stage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376330) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:35 AM Author: Claret selfie Okay? Wow. Hey. Picture this: Cars A and B. Right? Going through section X. *makes large "X" using forearms* And boom! Right there, they pass car C. *makes "C" using hand* A car which, at the time, was containing D *unzips pants* as a passenger. *pulls cock out of fly* Any questions? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376331) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: Shimmering tantric center So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:49 AM Author: mustard haunted graveyard roast beef I just copied this from a brief. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376419) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: Hyperventilating state clown Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: magical razzle-dazzle point shitlib A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: duck-like vermilion hospital Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: Bistre Alpha A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: Bearded Multi-billionaire Dragon andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: Spruce Haunting Pocket Flask Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#49827205) |
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