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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: Big azure stead idiot As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: bistre water buffalo factory reset button "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: provocative lemon brethren they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Pontificating haunted graveyard Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: exhilarant address As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: vigorous cheese-eating puppy mad cow disease Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: Razzle dun mexican crackhouse “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: claret garrison windowlicker (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Big azure stead idiot i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: Razzle dun mexican crackhouse Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Big azure stead idiot C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: bistre water buffalo factory reset button "at this time"
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: provocative lemon brethren Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Razzle dun mexican crackhouse Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: provocative lemon brethren You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Galvanic box office boiling water While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: contagious fiercely-loyal school cafeteria french chef (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: geriatric casino As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: awkward gas station really tough guy This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Swashbuckling Walnut Forum Yarmulke A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376194) |
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As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Big azure stead idiot i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: primrose voyeur theater As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: Big azure stead idiot doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: primrose voyeur theater it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: provocative lemon brethren Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: bisexual cerebral legal warrant azn Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: Flushed Marketing Idea A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: Slimy hairy legs andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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