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I found whok's 2005 novel excerpt, jfc
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Date: June 6th, 2019 2:55 AM Author: Metal telephone I never thought I'd do it, but I finally found it.
http://www.ilovephilosophy.com/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=166449 |
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Date: June 7th, 2019 9:26 PM Author: green swashbuckling trailer park Ty. What an awful hunk of literary shit. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38357077) |
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Date: June 7th, 2019 10:03 PM Author: Metal telephone (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38357174) |
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Date: June 7th, 2019 10:10 PM Author: lavender gas station Hey fuck you nigger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38357197) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 12:57 AM Author: Medicated Affirmative Action Stage So that's the IRL excerpt, whok? It's worse than I thought 😱 (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38357754) |
Date: June 6th, 2019 2:59 AM Author: Metal telephone More interesting whok-related threading:
http://www.xoxohth.com/thread.php?thread_id=707335&forum_id=2#8815649
http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=1444726&forum_id=2
http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=1582700&forum_id=2#17456061
http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=1435809&forum_id=2#16157379 |
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Date: June 6th, 2019 10:58 AM Author: Metal telephone (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38348500) |
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Date: June 6th, 2019 10:33 PM Author: Metal telephone (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38351861) |
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Date: June 6th, 2019 11:06 PM Author: submissive legal warrant wagecucks To be at a fair,
There is more to eat than ice cream and cake. Some people go on dates and have corn dogs and fried dough. Sometimes there is a pie eating contest with delicious apple pies where contestant don't use their hands.
TBF running honiara schtick 1.0
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Date: June 7th, 2019 9:07 PM Author: Medicated Affirmative Action Stage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38357037) |
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Date: June 7th, 2019 10:27 PM Author: Twisted impertinent hall halford fake news, it’s literally one sentence (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38357251) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 12:58 AM Author: Medicated Affirmative Action Stage Not fake news, whok confirmed above.
Remember that whok was a 22-year-old dude who knew nothing about writing back then (not that he knows anything about writing now) but that's literally his "excerpt." |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 1:00 AM Author: lavender gas station Whats so bad about it, cunt? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38357757) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 1:03 AM Author: Medicated Affirmative Action Stage Hard to tell, dude. It doesn't draw you into a story, describes a bunch of stuff that doesn't make a lot of sense, poorly written. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38357770) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 1:06 AM Author: lavender gas station Poorly written, how?
I hope you know the guy/loser who stole the excerpt was a jealous and failed writer himself who posted it on his own message board and used sock puppets to criticise it. |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 1:21 AM Author: Medicated Affirmative Action Stage Confirm 2 things:
1. You're the IRL whok
2. That's the IRL excerpt written by you/him |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 1:27 AM Author: lavender gas station Subject: ... Nigger (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38357819) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 1:50 AM Author: Medicated Affirmative Action Stage WTF (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38357837) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 2:18 AM Author: Medicated Affirmative Action Stage Ok, if you want more details, here they are:
Excerpt (definition): A passage or quotation taken or selected from a book, document, film, or the like; extract.
Excerpts are supposed to be longer than that measly piece of trash. I would expect a FULL page to get an idea of what the larger work that is being showcased will cover.
What you wrote is literally a run-on sentence chunked together into a full paragraph. It almost looks as if you're asking "Hey, can someone tell me if I can write in the English language properly? I just took English 101."
Srsly, I hadn't read the excerpt when I first read what damn daddy wrote about it, but he's spot on:
"He spent a lot of time bragging about some stupid as fuck novel he was writing. the samples he showed to the bort indicated that whok may have suffered from blunt-force trauma to the skull at some point when his brain was still developing." (Ref: http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=2840029&forum_id=2#27570333)
Sorry, whok. This doesn't mean you can't improve, though. Why not take a creative writing course and an English 101? |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 3:28 AM Author: Bat-shit-crazy tan plaza legend Dood just tell me whats wrong with it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38357906) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 4:00 AM Author: Medicated Affirmative Action Stage I went into DETAIL about it. You don't understand what I wrote? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38357937) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 4:00 AM Author: Bat-shit-crazy tan plaza legend So you have no idea and are just a vile cunt. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38357939) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 4:17 AM Author: Medicated Affirmative Action Stage What questions do you have? Be specific. I already said its a run on sentence into a chunk or paragraph and short enough that cant qualify as an excerpt. It looks like what an 11-year-old would ask his teacher at his first try at writing something.
Ask away if you have actual questions. No clue wtf you want to hear. |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 10:04 PM Author: lavender gas station Novels aren't explicitly subject to perfect grammar and form. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38360752) |
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Date: June 9th, 2019 2:55 AM Author: Medicated Affirmative Action Stage WTF are you saying here.
Even if that were the case, we'd have to then be blown away by the content. You only provided a tiny excerpt where content and grammar are shit.
Provide a full page and then we can talk. |
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Date: September 20th, 2026 9:21 AM Author: Fucking Fuckface "Poorly written how?" I don't see why it matters whether it was pen to paper, fingers to keyboard, or rudimentary speech to text. It's fucking terrible no matter how it was barfed into the world (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#50144972) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 11:56 AM Author: Medicated Affirmative Action Stage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38358699) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 12:35 PM Author: Medicated Affirmative Action Stage whok? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38358819) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 1:54 PM Author: Laughsome national fuck you, nigger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38359036) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 7:17 PM Author: Medicated Affirmative Action Stage ? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38360123) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 10:21 PM Author: lavender gas station TITMFCR (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38360788) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 10:43 PM Author: Medicated Affirmative Action Stage ? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38360866) |
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Date: March 20th, 2020 1:04 AM Author: Bat-shit-crazy tan plaza legend 180 (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#39813962) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 2:10 PM Author: Rough-skinned doctorate roast beef wtf that was awful (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38359084) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 3:21 PM Author: Medicated Affirmative Action Stage Titcr (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38359329) |
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Date: June 14th, 2019 12:18 AM Author: Medicated Affirmative Action Stage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#38387165) |
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Date: March 20th, 2020 12:35 AM Author: Metal telephone (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#39813773) |
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Date: March 20th, 2020 11:34 PM Author: Medicated Affirmative Action Stage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#39822271) |
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Date: June 13th, 2020 11:09 PM Author: Galvanic Hot Pozpig Point (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#40412654) |
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Date: July 15th, 2020 1:31 AM Author: Metal telephone (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#40610764) |
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Date: July 17th, 2020 1:34 PM Author: Metal telephone http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=897971&forum_id=2#10505289 (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#40622701) |
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Date: September 29th, 2020 5:26 PM Author: Floppy Messiness Temple (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#41010322) |
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Date: September 29th, 2020 6:24 PM Author: Metal telephone (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#41010648) |
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Date: September 20th, 2026 9:10 AM Author: Beta macaca (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#50144968) |
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Date: September 20th, 2026 1:19 PM Author: Beta macaca (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#50145348) |
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Date: September 20th, 2026 10:18 PM Author: Hans Reiter/Benno von Archimboldi ? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2#50146511) |