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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: Citrine odious field As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: Soul-stirring Sexy Partner Dopamine "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: arousing range death wish they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Excitant location telephone Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: cerebral sandwich really tough guy As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: scarlet federal laser beams public bath Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: Elite den “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: chartreuse thriller foreskin (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Citrine odious field i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: Elite den Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Citrine odious field C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: Soul-stirring Sexy Partner Dopamine "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: arousing range death wish Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Elite den Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: arousing range death wish You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Adventurous Bright Weed Whacker Senate While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: Marvelous Parlour Sneaky Criminal (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: Mustard Immigrant Twinkling Uncleanness As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: supple stage This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Citrine odious field (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: Crusty histrionic orchestra pit (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376392) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:08 AM Author: Sick razzle-dazzle church building (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376526) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:25 AM Author: doobsian party of the first part school (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376657) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: Deep kitty alpha Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Contagious Dilemma Antidepressant Drug As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: Swollen Theater (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: onyx unhinged trailer park (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376340) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Obsidian effete rigpig FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Purple hairy legs indian lodge (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376187) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: supple stage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376195) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Mind-boggling center (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376249) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: topaz house (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376406) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:36 AM Author: Rebellious comical shrine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376713) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:37 AM Author: Crusty histrionic orchestra pit (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376724) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:32 PM Author: Flushed bateful personal credit line (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42377057) |
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Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: Purple hairy legs indian lodge (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42380818) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Purple hairy legs indian lodge As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: chartreuse thriller foreskin i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Sable pistol (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42378174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: chartreuse thriller foreskin i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376189) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: brass stirring set (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376669) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Harsh tattoo crackhouse A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: vibrant deranged generalized bond (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376341) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: Soul-stirring Sexy Partner Dopamine sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: sooty talking legal warrant i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Citrine odious field i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: sooty talking legal warrant As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: Citrine odious field doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: sooty talking legal warrant it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: arousing range death wish Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Narrow-minded talented locus people who are hurt you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: Heady abnormal piazza Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: chartreuse thriller foreskin turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:20 AM Author: vibrant deranged generalized bond (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376607) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Mind-boggling center As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: High-end provocative legend The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: Harsh tattoo crackhouse star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: High-end provocative legend still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:34 AM Author: Elite den (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376330) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:35 AM Author: onyx unhinged trailer park Okay? Wow. Hey. Picture this: Cars A and B. Right? Going through section X. *makes large "X" using forearms* And boom! Right there, they pass car C. *makes "C" using hand* A car which, at the time, was containing D *unzips pants* as a passenger. *pulls cock out of fly* Any questions? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376331) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:40 AM Author: razzle spot stain A and B, as was their custom from time to time, were engaged in that most fanciful of modern hobbies, navigation of modern paved roads in a device propelled by an internal combustion engine, whence, they happened to pass by and through the X area. It was delightful that time of year and a welcome respite from their usual tiresome surroundings. And, as fate or chance, or even perhaps the Muses had it, another fellow engaged in the very same hobby happened by. Of course, known to them, and combustion engine navigators the State over, twas C along with D. Both were fair fellows and known to A and B. As custom would insist they happened both to notice and acknowledge each other, hobbyists in the same pursuit as they were. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376358) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: Laughsome market So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: Laughsome market Wow (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376411) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:21 PM Author: blue sickened marketing idea (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42377415) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:00 AM Author: Fragrant iridescent internal respiration (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44008886) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:32 AM Author: Bearded electric national security agency (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44722509) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:51 AM Author: Marvelous Parlour Sneaky Criminal (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376432) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: vibrant deranged generalized bond titcr. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376504) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:10 AM Author: blue sickened marketing idea 180 (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376531) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:18 AM Author: Crusty histrionic orchestra pit (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376589) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:23 AM Author: Sable pistol (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376641) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: Fragrant iridescent internal respiration holy shit (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376648) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:34 AM Author: Crusty histrionic orchestra pit attn low attention span poasters read this whole thing pls (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376708) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:35 AM Author: supple stage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376711) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:00 PM Author: bronze sanctuary sweet tailpipe (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376866) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: fluffy point (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376872) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:27 PM Author: Sable pistol (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42378128) |
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Date: June 1st, 2021 9:20 PM Author: bronze sanctuary sweet tailpipe (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42558237) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:00 AM Author: Fragrant iridescent internal respiration (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44008882) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:05 AM Author: bronze sanctuary sweet tailpipe this is incredible (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44008910) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:39 PM Author: Fragrant iridescent internal respiration (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44032706) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:31 PM Author: Beady-eyed snowy dragon (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44453902) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:31 AM Author: Bearded electric national security agency wow (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44722507) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:34 AM Author: blue sickened marketing idea (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44722517) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:44 AM Author: appetizing useless station hissy fit (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44722548) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:49 AM Author: wine adulterous brunch volcanic crater High | level | legal work (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376422) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: brass stirring set (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376672) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: Up-to-no-good Misanthropic Native Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: Dead university digit ratio A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: Aromatic Canary Stage Roast Beef two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: Maroon self-centered national C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: Puce well-lubricated potus address As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: Trip site ratface Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:27 AM Author: Sable pistol This was basically gromjoh's poast above except his was more concise. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376665) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:34 AM Author: Fragrant iridescent internal respiration (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376704) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: supple stage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376736) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:08 PM Author: racy nursing home nowag (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42377648) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:01 AM Author: Fragrant iridescent internal respiration (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44008887) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: Lascivious milky haunted graveyard writing MFE's, any resources on improving clunky writing? I recently jumped from GOV to tech (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376695) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: supple stage Did you try the hydro hack? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376699) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: mint heaven police squad What’s that (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376738) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: supple stage You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376746) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:49 AM Author: Crusty histrionic orchestra pit (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376800) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: dashing lay Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42377389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: dashing lay A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: at-the-ready pea-brained temple liquid oxygen andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:38 PM Author: exciting garnet voyeur box office I am gay (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42377484) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Sable pistol great thread (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42378176) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: Maize Passionate Jap Elastic Band Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: Narrow-minded talented locus people who are hurt A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42379691) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:50 PM Author: Narrow-minded talented locus people who are hurt (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42387061) |
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Date: May 23rd, 2021 3:44 PM Author: Narrow-minded talented locus people who are hurt (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42509184) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:36 PM Author: supple stage Where are we on this? Thank (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42386977) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: sienna whorehouse fortuitous meteor As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44008916) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:44 PM Author: Soul-stirring Sexy Partner Dopamine OP, does this help? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44032743) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:32 AM Author: Razzmatazz plum chad corner i don't think anyone reads shitlaw shitpaper so it doesn't matter. aren't state court judges borderline retarded? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44722512) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:23 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#49827186) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: tubby spastic 11yo playing in toddler section Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#49827228) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 2:57 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#49827363) |