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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: diverse home As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: boyish cream electric furnace place of business "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: Ocher locale newt they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Hairraiser cruise ship Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: Hyperventilating hideous resort As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Crystalline Jet-lagged Half-breed Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: Violent center turdskin “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: diverse home i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: Violent center turdskin Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: diverse home C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: boyish cream electric furnace place of business "at this time"
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: Ocher locale newt Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Violent center turdskin Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: Ocher locale newt You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: flesh stead While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: Charcoal legend As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Fishy pit This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Pink Excitant Den i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: diverse home i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Pink Excitant Den As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: diverse home doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: Pink Excitant Den it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Ocher locale newt Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Crawly juggernaut you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: Lime Church Building The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376290) |
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This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: Smoky milk Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: vivacious property travel guidebook A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: Jet Vigorous Plaza two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: Amber feces C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: Curious stain As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: Big-titted drunken associate Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:27 AM Author: Stubborn Son Of Senegal This was basically gromjoh's poast above except his was more concise. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376665) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: Hairless area writing MFE's, any resources on improving clunky writing? I recently jumped from GOV to tech (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376695) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: Fishy pit Did you try the hydro hack? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376699) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: fuchsia pungent point What’s that (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376738) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: Fishy pit You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376746) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: arrogant french chef dopamine Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42377389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: arrogant french chef dopamine A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: irradiated poppy dingle berry andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: Yellow sadistic hell windowlicker Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: Crawly juggernaut A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42379691) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:50 PM Author: Crawly juggernaut (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42387061) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:36 PM Author: Fishy pit Where are we on this? Thank (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42386977) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: Turquoise titillating national As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44008916) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:44 PM Author: boyish cream electric furnace place of business OP, does this help? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44032743) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:32 AM Author: Aphrodisiac spruce telephone i don't think anyone reads shitlaw shitpaper so it doesn't matter. aren't state court judges borderline retarded? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44722512) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:23 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#49827186) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: tubby spastic 11yo playing in toddler section Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#49827228) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 2:57 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#49827363) |