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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: frum famous landscape painting goyim As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: domesticated charismatic sound barrier "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: gay at-the-ready queen of the night ratface they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Diverse harsh box office Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: magenta well-lubricated alpha lodge As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: stubborn orchid sweet tailpipe business firm Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: henna reading party theatre “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: Violet zombie-like pistol mood (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: frum famous landscape painting goyim i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: henna reading party theatre Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: frum famous landscape painting goyim C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: domesticated charismatic sound barrier "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: gay at-the-ready queen of the night ratface Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: henna reading party theatre Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: gay at-the-ready queen of the night ratface You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: gaped exciting heaven feces While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: Scarlet Ungodly Headpube (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: Cruel-hearted Marvelous Black Woman Karate As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: floppy coffee pot athletic conference This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: frum famous landscape painting goyim (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376203) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: buck-toothed brethren Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Amethyst Adventurous Home As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Dashing electric furnace blood rage FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: aromatic partner As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Violet zombie-like pistol mood i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: pungent haunted graveyard A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: stimulating halford (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376341) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: domesticated charismatic sound barrier sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: startled temple i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: frum famous landscape painting goyim i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: startled temple As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: frum famous landscape painting goyim doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: startled temple it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: gay at-the-ready queen of the night ratface Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: navy hairraiser multi-billionaire codepig you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: Galvanic narrow-minded goal in life genital piercing Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: Violet zombie-like pistol mood turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: beady-eyed buff turdskin hairy legs As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: vivacious water buffalo The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: pungent haunted graveyard star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: vivacious water buffalo still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:34 AM Author: henna reading party theatre (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376330) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: brass fear-inspiring piazza philosopher-king A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: Fighting Base two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: startling violent abode Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: big hyperventilating church international law enforcement agency A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: Cocky maniacal tattoo andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: crimson hissy fit Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: navy hairraiser multi-billionaire codepig A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42379691) |
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