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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: Aromatic burgundy milk associate As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: swashbuckling mewling masturbator "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: Stubborn dysfunction they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Diverse Nighttime Friendly Grandma Sound Barrier Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: Gay school rigpig As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: cerebral church building Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: unhinged concupiscible striped hyena “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: Self-centered dilemma son of senegal (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Aromatic burgundy milk associate i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: unhinged concupiscible striped hyena Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Aromatic burgundy milk associate C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: swashbuckling mewling masturbator "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: Stubborn dysfunction Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: unhinged concupiscible striped hyena Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: Stubborn dysfunction You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Curious Iridescent Scourge Upon The Earth Stag Film While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: Idiotic big parlour ladyboy (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: Adventurous glassy casino As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: aphrodisiac boiling water forum This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Aromatic burgundy milk associate (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376203) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: exhilarant yarmulke property Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: painfully honest macaca gas station As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Chartreuse comical toaster FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: blathering french chef set As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Self-centered dilemma son of senegal i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: marvelous school cafeteria A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: 180 underhanded ratface i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Aromatic burgundy milk associate i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: 180 underhanded ratface As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: Aromatic burgundy milk associate doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: 180 underhanded ratface it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Stubborn dysfunction Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Hairraiser slippery hairy legs you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: Judgmental bipolar theater selfie Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: Self-centered dilemma son of senegal turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Odious Citrine Affirmative Action As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: Contagious Corner Gay Wizard The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: Contagious Corner Gay Wizard still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: Black Turdskin Library A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: bateful wild mental disorder two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: Mildly Autistic Regret Giraffe C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: glittery obsidian crackhouse famous landscape painting As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: ultramarine high-end police squad haunted graveyard Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: garnet razzle-dazzle trump supporter A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: Boyish stead factory reset button andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: Fiercely-loyal orchestra pit Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: tubby spastic 11yo playing in toddler section Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#49827228) |
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